March 28th, 2006

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I have a favor to ask of you guys...

Okay so I wrote this mini-fanfiction for Boondock Saints... It's all right but... I don't know, something's a bit off. It starts out being funny, and then just gets angsty for no reason. Eech.

So here's the favor: I want y'all to critique it before I post it on ff.net.

Be totally honest... maim it, kill it, tear it to pieces, for the love of Mark... but I really really need some feedback.
Thanks in advance.

Oh. And it's slash. Smecker/Greenly slash, to be exact.
Rated M for strong language and what-have-yous.

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